input needed!

no flames plz. but making this for a streamer friend it was made using 19 different wallpapers of dd2. gonna add the logo into the 19th scene once i create one. but not sure i want to give it to this person due to they are not as dedicated to the game as someone, like say @MrJuicebags. and might offer it to him lol. but i digress, the reason im writing this is to ask for help on the script.i need 19 phrases, 1 for each scene eg 

1. welcome to the stream.

2. join chat

ect. heres the demo. if i need to i can cut out phrases if 19 is too much.

Looked pretty nice.

Didn't like the blue and red random boxes appearing.

Too much white "fog" feels a bit in my face.

Great video!  

My two cents, providing credit o the artists of the images in your video (unless you) is respectful.  Join Chat and then join the conversation maybe just say "Chat" with below saying "Join the conversation"?  

Really though, great video!

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Great video!  

My two cents, providing credit o the artists of the images in your video (unless you) is respectful.  Join Chat and then join the conversation maybe just say "Chat" with below saying "Join the conversation"?  

Really though, great video!

yea once done i will but every image is a result of google search for dd2 wallpaper i think atleast 76% are official i just added paralax and 3d look.

Also all letters shall have black outline to be readable.
Reduce the white to minimum,some of us have high quality monitors and it really does burn eyes in this ammount of white space. You can make it light green,that is easy on eyes and matches pictures you use better.

0:38, you spelled carry wrong.

@xLeGeNdxKiLLeRx quote:

0:38, you spelled carry wrong.

i know, but at 2 hrs to process lol ill fix when all edits are in

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Too much white "fog" feels a bit in my face.

Pretty much this to me. Maybe a little more transparency to them? It looks awesome though, great work!

As far as the 19 phrases... Maybe consider having phrase-less transition slides for every other one? I think the spacing might be nice (of course, I could be entirely wrong lol) and then you wouldn't need as many phrases.

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@PandynatorDD quote:

Too much white "fog" feels a bit in my face.

Pretty much this to me. Maybe a little more transparency to them? It looks awesome though, great work!

As far as the 19 phrases... Maybe consider having phrase-less transition slides for every other one? I think the spacing might be nice (of course, I could be entirely wrong lol) and then you wouldn't need as many phrases.

yea i was thinking half the phrases mightbe better too.

One screenshot was of the MOBA countess character - not in DD2 and I believe there was another MOBA character but you can wait to see if it is similar to the upcoming barbarian. Also the squire kissing the huntress is from DD1. You used the Defense Council picture twice.

Yeah, the fog and blue flashy squares were unnecessary. Are the crosshairs/plus signs supposed to be there? if they are, no problem.

Definitely a very good first cut.